| Checklist for Definition Essays | No | Yes | Wow! |
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in a way that grabs the reader's attention?
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| Does the conclusion "touch" back on a phrase or idea from the introduction? |
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Someone
once compared happiness to activity, describing it a running stream, not
a stagnant pool. I’ve found that the times I’ve been the happiest
are also the times that I’ve been most active. Indeed, my most vivid
memories of felicity center around those occasions when I accomplished
a goal relevant to my particular stage of life.
As a child, my
happiest time occurred when I learned to read. It was as though the
secret code of the printed word was revealed to me. Being the youngest
in my family meant I was the last one to learn
to
read. At last I could carry books to read on the bus. My mom
would take me to the public library to check out Winnie the Pooh and Curious
George books with my very own library card. I remember how excited
I was to finally move up to reading Little House on the Prairie and
Nancy Drew books. Indeed, being able to read materials that didn’t
contain a lot of illustrations was really important to me. Learning to
read advanced me from the stage of being a baby to that of being a student.
As a teenager,
getting my first job stands out as a happy time. I thought working at Burger
King was a giant step toward being independent. I compared being able to
take an order correctly and making change to brain surgery. I never wanted
to miss a day of work and would always be willing to work more hours, for
now time was truly money. That first paycheck for $100 seemed at
the time like thousands.
Finally, the birth
of my daughter, Samantha, was a time filled with happiness as an adult.
I was reaching my goal of being a parent. I wasn’t at all sure of
my qualifications, but I had read extensively and couldn’t wait to get
started with this new stage in my life. I didn’t know until after the birth
whether I had a girl or boy. The anticipation of the birth and not
knowing the sex of the baby made this event even more memorable.
I remember Dr. Lott counting all ten fingers and all ten toes before ever
mentioning the fact that my baby was a girl. Samantha was certainly
not a Gerber baby with her long, skinny legs and cone-shaped head; nevertheless,
I couldn’t have been happier with my baby daughter.
In conclusion,
happy times for me all involve attaining a goal. My next goal is to earn
a bachelor’s degree and become a teacher, for that will surely be a happy
occasion. As life goes on, I plan to set more goals to keep me active and
happily moving forward to the next stage of my life.